31 October 2006 @ 03:34 am
Fic: Bits and Pieces [of you] (R) by raeyashi  
Title: Bits and Pieces [of you]
Author: [info]raeyashi
Pairing: Don/Charlie
Summary: Your mind scatters, leaves on a breeze.
Rating: R
Warning: Slash
Thank you: To [info]melissima and [info]emmademarais: you know why. <3; Mark Z. Danielewski for breaking boundaries with House of Leaves
Author's Note:THIS IS AN IMAGE INTENSIVE FANFIC. It is made up of 21 images, so dial up users may want to steer clear. Thank you.














































 
 
 
 
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Emma DeMarais: BlueEye[info]emmademarais on October 31st, 2006 04:55 am (UTC)
Hold on to the joy...
I had to be the first to post so I could say

THIS IS BREATHTAKING.

I am in awe of this, of you, of a world where such wonders can still shock me out of my complacency.

I feel honored to be in your circle, ma cherie. To be in your dedication fills me with indescribable happiness.

Hold on to the joy...

-Emma
Walking Liability: [LoM] Gang of Four[info]raeyashi on November 1st, 2006 09:18 pm (UTC)
Re: Hold on to the joy...
^^

Thank you babe. It's been hard squeezing this stuff lately but I'm glad that I have something left.

<3



Emma DeMarais: BlueEye[info]emmademarais on November 1st, 2006 09:20 pm (UTC)
Re: Hold on to the joy...
Not something...

Something truly amazing...

I meant what I said. Hold on tight...

/squishes you for good measure/
Walking Liability[info]raeyashi on November 2nd, 2006 02:25 am (UTC)
Re: Hold on to the joy...
<3

I really do appreciate it.
R-EVOLVE: sexy!wilson[info]jaredsexual on October 31st, 2006 05:24 am (UTC)
that was incredibly powerful. wow.
Walking Liability: [JGL] Still Life in BW[info]raeyashi on November 2nd, 2006 02:11 am (UTC)
Thank you very much for reading and your kind words.
NV: Numb3rs - Beautiful Mind[info]neur0vanity on October 31st, 2006 05:47 am (UTC)
You are an absolute godlike genius. Wow.
Walking Liability: [BSG] Pretty Little Disease[info]raeyashi on November 2nd, 2006 02:12 am (UTC)
Eeee! Thank you neur0!
andi[info]admiralandrea on October 31st, 2006 05:55 am (UTC)
Holy shit! That was incredible!
Walking Liability: [N3] Before the Storm[info]raeyashi on November 2nd, 2006 02:13 am (UTC)
Thank you so much.

I just have to tell you that your icon is a weapon of mass destruction.
andi[info]admiralandrea on November 2nd, 2006 05:35 am (UTC)
That icon sure is! It's by angelskuupio and I think it's awesome. Although, I noticed first for the hands (my major "thing"), it's just generally *guh*
I'll be your wife in Kyoto.: D/C on my mind[info]honeyswallow on October 31st, 2006 06:23 am (UTC)
Oh my. Oh my. You know I love you and one of the reasons is this. My, am I proud of you ;D One of the parts I liked best what that DON (when did you get so beautiful?) part. It gripped me somehow.
Emma DeMarais: BlueEye[info]emmademarais on November 1st, 2006 09:22 pm (UTC)
Me too.

That's the line that hit me in the chest.

While I'd love to have someone say that to me personally, having a man say that to another man, one he's known his whole life? /shakes head/ Breathtaking...
Walking Liability: [SGA] Doctoring the Tardis[info]raeyashi on November 2nd, 2006 02:15 am (UTC)
:blushes:

I loved the idea of Charlie saying that to Don. Some variation of beautiful seems to be said to Charlie all the time in fic. It's Don's turn now.

Thank you. :D
Miss Molly etc[info]missmollyetc on October 31st, 2006 08:35 am (UTC)
What a lovely piece of work. :) I really like the e.e. cummings motif you're using here, because it so eloquently marries the words with the emotion, while still retaining a coherent (if slightly surreal 'cause hey! Incest firt time!) progression. Wonderful job!
pro_f_iler[info]pro_f_iler on October 31st, 2006 09:17 am (UTC)
Art! Brava!
[info]irisheyeslaughn on October 31st, 2006 12:25 pm (UTC)
Watch out for eighties throwback-

AWESOME!! TOTALLY AWESOME!!!

I did not know what to expect when I saw the link, but I am sooooo glad I followed it. This is the most spectacular piece of work I've seen in a long time. Kudos to you.
pro_f_iler: Don still a kid by angeliksmall[info]pro_f_iler on October 31st, 2006 05:44 pm (UTC)
What do you mean "throwback"? I use that phrase every day, duuuuude. ;-)
Walking Liability: [RM] He Has Moments[info]raeyashi on November 2nd, 2006 02:24 am (UTC)
Thanks for giving this a chance. I really appreciate that you reviewed and read it.
Walking Liability: [Misc] Nautilus Spiral[info]raeyashi on November 2nd, 2006 02:23 am (UTC)
Thank you very much.
Tya, lost and found: [n3] Don leanin'[info]tya_rc on October 31st, 2006 12:26 pm (UTC)
BRILLIANT ♥
Walking Liability: [N3] Simple Moments[info]raeyashi on November 2nd, 2006 02:23 am (UTC)
Why thank you. ^^
Karen the Disasterous: numb3rs Charlie (sin)[info]byrons_brain on October 31st, 2006 12:40 pm (UTC)
Holy hell! that was wonderful.... I love your layout and expression of words...
Walking Liability: [SPN] He Can[info]raeyashi on November 2nd, 2006 02:22 am (UTC)
That was the hardest thing to do, the layout. Thank you for thinking it was done well.
T.[info]monkeyfun1 on October 31st, 2006 02:08 pm (UTC)
I. Am. Awed.
Thank you for sharing your hard work.
T
Walking Liability: [CKR] Fallen[info]raeyashi on November 2nd, 2006 02:21 am (UTC)
Thank you so much for reviewing. I really appreciate it.
The Fourth Mile: Colbert[info]charmlarken on October 31st, 2006 02:15 pm (UTC)
I love this, as I said last night, simply for being so different, so visual. You never fail to impress me. :-)
Walking Liability: [Lost] Mary Mother of God[info]raeyashi on November 2nd, 2006 02:19 am (UTC)
^^ Thank you Sara!

And I can't look at that one image without giggling. Up Down indeed.
Big Cinema: lost in you[info]orlisheart on October 31st, 2006 02:48 pm (UTC)
Oh my. You are amazing and brilliant.
Walking Liability: [DW] And What Business Of Yours?[info]raeyashi on November 2nd, 2006 02:18 am (UTC)
Chan, thank you. <3
(Anonymous) on October 31st, 2006 03:04 pm (UTC)
Incredible. Stunning. What you do with words never fails to amaze me- though I'm rather sorry I'm only telling you this now.

-Marky
Walking Liability: [PB] Chain[info]raeyashi on November 2nd, 2006 02:17 am (UTC)
Awww. I appreciate your words even if you believe them to be late. Thank you very much.
One Part Exuberance; Two Parts Obsession: eppescest forever[info]penguingal on October 31st, 2006 03:15 pm (UTC)
That is amazaing, my dear Ley. And hot, too.

A triumph! Nothing more nor less than a triumph!
Walking Liability: [IASiP] I'm With Those Bastards[info]raeyashi on November 2nd, 2006 02:16 am (UTC)
No one called my work a triumph. I like this first. :D

Thank you my sweet Mags. ^^
fever dreamer: sga; (michael) misbegotten[info]viennawaits on October 31st, 2006 03:25 pm (UTC)
It's rare that fic can surprise me anymore. Can make me feel like I'm reading something new, but then you post and it's something like this, but more.

Very beautiful. It pulls you along.
Walking Liability: [BSG] Everything is Real Between Us[info]raeyashi on November 1st, 2006 09:15 pm (UTC)
Oh wow. That is such a huge compliment for me. More than anything I'm proud that it was able to feel new for you. It's a hard thing to achieve in fanfiction and I'm happy that I did.

Thank you.
melissima[info]melissima on October 31st, 2006 05:23 pm (UTC)
I finally got to see the image version!
You know this stole my breath when I read it as text-- my comparisons to James Joyce and Gertrude Stein still hold.

AND what you have done with it visually is amazing. You are a truly gifted poet.

I am not just saying that because I love you.

I do love you, though. <3 &hearts <3
Walking Liability: [Misc] Squid Hello[info]raeyashi on November 1st, 2006 09:04 pm (UTC)
Re: I finally got to see the image version!
:blushes:

Thank you love. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Without your help I really wouldn't have the confidence to continue on as a fanfiction writer. I thank you.

:3
[info]ambientscone on November 1st, 2006 05:47 am (UTC)
Totally show me how to make those!
Walking Liability: [BSG] Pretty Little Disease[info]raeyashi on November 1st, 2006 09:02 pm (UTC)
Of course. Whenever you aren't too busy I would love to.
amoral_angel: draw[info]amoral_angel on November 6th, 2006 04:21 am (UTC)
I sit here in complete awe of your mastery. Love, desire, awareness - all wound together and presented in an almost visceral medium. Not only does it transmit visually but the reader feels every word trembling through their veins and electrifying their senses.

Thank you for this gift.
Walking Liability: [N3] See Right Through You[info]raeyashi on November 6th, 2006 05:33 am (UTC)
Oh, thank you for the gift of this lovely reply. It is so very kind and generous. I always try my best to give the readers a response any way possible. I'm happy I was able to do so. Thank you.
Leslie: eye_condy--link's talents[info]shadowcat15 on November 11th, 2006 07:27 am (UTC)
Holy Shit. That was so hot, and I think it was the format that made it that way.
ametrine0012[info]ametrine0012 on May 20th, 2008 04:56 am (UTC)
Wow
Very nice. Artistically done smut. You get a 120/100 for presentation of your piece. It would have not been anywhere near as good just written out as plain text. mmmm...
devon99: Flushed!![info]devon99 on June 16th, 2008 06:16 pm (UTC)
This really is an amazing piece of work.

The format really does focus you to concentrate on each and every word..it feels so visceral and immediate and yet so intimate.

Loved it. Every now and then a piece comes along that hooks you and surprises you with both its quality and originality. This is a prime example.